(07-10-2021, 04:08 PM)robkelk Wrote: Sorry to leave that on a cliffhanger... There's still two big scenes (which might or might not be intercut with each other) and an epilogue to be written, but I promised myself that I'd post something before the week was out.
spotted a typo in the last line
Ben could her Shiro add,
underlined should be hear
looking forward to the next part