RE: Chapter 4 is now available for your reading pleasure.
03-17-2022, 07:27 AM (This post was last modified: 03-17-2022, 07:31 AM by Bob Schroeck.)
03-17-2022, 07:27 AM (This post was last modified: 03-17-2022, 07:31 AM by Bob Schroeck.)
> Shanahan
Don't do that! I went nuts looking for that "typo" just now.
<sigh> And I had so much fun doing Haruka's drive from her POV, thanks to Google Streeview...
I had several different typos on "soldier" in the final few Kb of the chapter; they were all fixed in the online copy by 6:30PM EDT last night. (This is what happens when you don't give the end of the chapter the same year-and-a-half of proofreading you gave the rest of it.)
As for archaeological evidence, yeah. At some point Doug is going to realize what he did when he decided to spare the girls the gruesome sight and facepalm.
And you make a good point about the disguise pen... but then I'd have to retcon Doug asking to it to transform him into "a pretty ugly guy".
Don't do that! I went nuts looking for that "typo" just now.
<sigh> And I had so much fun doing Haruka's drive from her POV, thanks to Google Streeview...
I had several different typos on "soldier" in the final few Kb of the chapter; they were all fixed in the online copy by 6:30PM EDT last night. (This is what happens when you don't give the end of the chapter the same year-and-a-half of proofreading you gave the rest of it.)
As for archaeological evidence, yeah. At some point Doug is going to realize what he did when he decided to spare the girls the gruesome sight and facepalm.
And you make a good point about the disguise pen... but then I'd have to retcon Doug asking to it to transform him into "a pretty ugly guy".
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....