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Chapter 4 is now available for your reading pleasure.
RE: Chapter 4 is now available for your reading pleasure.
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And at least your typo didn't bring the Seanchan in with the Shanahan and Shanshan.  Good luck explaining how a male named Looney Toons hadn't gone mad from the One Power.

I'm currently watching a Korean drama where there's a lot of moving back and forth in time, and between universes, without any kind of obvious signal -- to a level that it's even annoying to fans of the show.  So I didn't even notice that you were writing in chronological order until I checked the timestamps later... and the ritual had effect before cause.  That's a pretty neat idea.  I'm sure that Her Nibettes is responsible for this and not the song power. Magic should feel magical, and that certainly did.

Though when Usagi started screaming a note at the beginning of a song, I was sure I won't get fooled again.  Yeaaaaaah!
"Kitto daijoubu da yo." - Sakura Kinomoto
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RE: Chapter 4 is now available for your reading pleasure. - by Labster - 03-18-2022, 07:41 PM

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