(02-15-2023, 09:48 AM)robkelk Wrote: Agree on the first one, disagree on the second. If you cut off my constructive criticism, I'll never change. Hugboxes are bad for writing.
There is a difference between constructive criticism, which is not about things you did not like in the story but about things you think can be improved and how, regardless of whether you liked them or not, and sending unsolicited messages about things you did not like.
(02-16-2023, 11:56 AM)Norgarth Wrote:
Oh that would've been amazing. Elle would've tied up the entire proceeding in knots. Not least of which because she only looks like she is a dumb blonde. She is actually very, very smart, just usually focused on things considered the province of the vapid.