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[RFC] Freedom?
RE: [RFC] Freedom?
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Unexpectedly dark at moments, but I like it. I didn't spot any mechanical errors as I read, but I'd want to do a closer pass just to make sure.

Quote:Meg found herself wondering what the Managers imagined happened behind the doors of Henrietta street once it came time for the residents to go to bed.

SI!Bob: Not my business, any more than what happens in our bedroom is anyone else's business. Assuming anything just because they're 33-S models is prejudice and/or fetishization.
-- Bob

I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber.  I have been 
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
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[RFC] Freedom? - by Dartz - 05-08-2023, 01:51 AM
RE: [RFC] Freedom? - by Bob Schroeck - 05-08-2023, 07:23 AM
RE: [RFC] Freedom? - by classicdrogn - 05-08-2023, 11:35 PM
RE: [RFC] Freedom? - by Dartz - 05-10-2023, 05:36 PM
RE: [RFC] Freedom? - by Bob Schroeck - 06-27-2023, 12:45 PM
RE: [RFC] Freedom? - by Dartz - 06-27-2023, 03:13 PM

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