[RFC] Freedom?

[classicdrogn]

In that moment she knew - it didn’t matter what evidence she had the company would side with the customer when it came down to it. It’d give her the money - then in a week’s time once the despite, yank it clear from her account, just when it’d all been forgotten about.

Customers generated revenue. Riders could be replaced with another sucker.

The utter unfairness of it stabbed.

It’d been setup.

"It'd been a setup" might be better at the end there, though I don't THINK that's technically wrong, but the main nit to be picked is up at the top. Despite what? Or should it be "once the dispute [something], yank...? "

also, "evidence she had, the"

Anyway, nice atmosphere to the bit, it has that 80s-future-noir feel that makes the BGC girls fit right in.