(08-13-2023, 04:13 PM)Vulpis Wrote: Reading through this, neat story. Though I can't help but comment on part 2, specifically about the bit about not being able to imagine a transforming heroine with Gundam imagery...someone obviously hasn't seen G-Gundam. Specifically Nobel Gundam. :-)
I trust you noticed (or will notice) the bit in Chapter 3 where she lampshades that.
Updates:
- I'm still waiting for one pre-reader to reply. I've been promised more than a few notes.
- Chapter 5 is at 65 kb.
- I have a lost of trope updates for the story's All The Tropes page ready to go.
- I've taken a page from Bob's book. Just like Drunkard's Walk has a planned sequel Girls Girls Girls, now Isekai by Moonlight has a planned sequel named after the final line of Calvin and Hobbes. 'Ryou grinned. "It's a magical world, Rob ol' buddy... Let's go exploring!"'
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
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Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Boycotting all products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to threaten to annex my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada