(08-13-2023, 04:13 PM)Vulpis Wrote: Reading through this, neat story. Though I can't help but comment on part 2, specifically about the bit about not being able to imagine a transforming heroine with Gundam imagery...someone obviously hasn't seen G-Gundam. Specifically Nobel Gundam. :-)
I trust you noticed (or will notice) the bit in Chapter 3 where she lampshades that.
Updates:
- I'm still waiting for one pre-reader to reply. I've been promised more than a few notes.
- Chapter 5 is at 65 kb.
- I have a lost of trope updates for the story's All The Tropes page ready to go.
- I've taken a page from Bob's book. Just like Drunkard's Walk has a planned sequel Girls Girls Girls, now Isekai by Moonlight has a planned sequel named after the final line of Calvin and Hobbes. 'Ryou grinned. "It's a magical world, Rob ol' buddy... Let's go exploring!"'
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Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada
Rob Kelk
Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
Boycotting ALL products from the USA as long as that country's leader continues to lie about my native country.
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada