RE: Isekai by Moonlight
08-18-2023, 06:41 AM (This post was last modified: 08-18-2023, 06:41 AM by robkelk.)
08-18-2023, 06:41 AM (This post was last modified: 08-18-2023, 06:41 AM by robkelk.)
(08-13-2023, 05:32 PM)robkelk Wrote: Updates:
- I'm still waiting for one pre-reader to reply. I've been promised more than a few notes.
- Chapter 5 is at 65 kb.
I've heard back from that prereader, and as a result a few scenes need some attention. At this point, I feel confident in making the promise: Unless I get hit by Truck-kun or something equally traumatic happens, chapter 4 should be up before Labour Day.
Chapter 5 is now at 64 kb - I excised a duplicate, poorly-written scene about finances, and added a somewhat-better written new scene about figure skating. (Did you know that Usagi has a cameo in Naoko Takeuchi's earlier manga The Cherry Project?)
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Sticks and stones can break your bones,
But words can break your heart.
- unknown
Forever neighbours, never neighbors
Government of Canada: How to immigrate to Canada
Government of Canada: Claiming refugee protection (asylum) from within Canada