(08-19-2023, 02:29 PM)robkelk Wrote: I'm tempted to revert this edit - adding words to what's in boldface for the first title drop, lampshading the actual title drop, replacing grammatical English with an eggcorn,... and one bit that's a matter of personal style so it might or might not enhance the trope description.
Should I?
I'd say revert. We don't pothole title drops to Title Drop, that's... no. Just no. Likewise adding words to the boldface -- if it's not in the title, it doesn't get bolded.
The eye dialect "wanna" is counter to our house style in this instance, too. Kill it all.
-- Bob
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....
I have been Roland, Beowulf, Achilles, Gilgamesh, Clark Kent, Mary Sue, DJ Croft, Skysaber. I have been
called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before the sun grows dim and cold....