Quote:She always enjoyed the walk I to work, King's Row was so different from Peatorian, instead of cream walls it was brick work for the most part, cars putted along the dirty streets, gangers watched from the shadows... It was more dangerous than her home demension, but at the same time more alive. She carefully side stepped some primal earth Clockwork stealing what looked like some sort of music device. She marveled at them, unlike her sleek, humanoid clockwork self, these things where primitive, scrap metal hammered together by psionic will, fascinating.spotted a couple typos, both in the same paragraph as it happens.
A day in the life of Theta
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A day in the life of Theta - by Dark Seraph - 02-28-2024, 11:57 PM
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