[OOC][SI][Multi-Xover] Calling All Writers - There's Nothing Better

[Black Aeronaut]

robkelk wrote:

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Thanks. (goes and reads) Okay, a couple of changes need to be made to my text.

Oh, yes:

Black Aeronaut wrote:

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... She had the most gorgeous and luxurious was raven-black, ...

I think you're missing the word "hair" somewhere in there.

Black Aeronaut wrote:

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"Hey!" barked Skuld, looking steamed. "Laguage!"
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Skuld gave Washu a flat glare. "Rat-screwed the Yggdrasil."
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Hey! Language!

Typo noted.  And also, Skuld always struck me as the one of the types that kinda has a double-standard.  Besides, 'screwed' is about bellpepper level while the F-bomb is a jalapeno.  But if you really think it's out of character for her, I'll go ahead and change it.

Dartz wrote:

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Christ... I forgot I was the exact same age as Misato.
As in, 3-4 weeks in the difference. That could've been so amusing.

Oh?  You mean you won't be joining us?