[OOC][SI][Multi-Xover] Calling All Writers - There's Nothing Better

[robkelk]

Thanks. (goes and reads) Okay, a couple of changes need to be made to my text.

Oh, yes:

... She had the most gorgeous and luxurious was raven-black, ...

I think you're missing the word "hair" somewhere in there.

...
"Hey!" barked Skuld, looking steamed. "Laguage!"
...
Skuld gave Washu a flat glare. "Rat-screwed the Yggdrasil."
...

Hey! Language!

Typo noted.  And also, Skuld always struck me as the one of the types that kinda has a double-standard.  Besides, 'screwed' is about bellpepper level while the F-bomb is a jalapeno.  But if you really think it's out of character for her, I'll go ahead and change it.!

It's your take on the character, and Skuld does grow somewhat over the course of the manga. As long as you don't mind justifying it to people who've only seen the early anime, leave it in.
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Rob Kelk
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