Hey, Raphael! Welcome to the forums!
We'd certainly be happy to help you improve your writing.
Hm. Come to think of it, enough folks do that here that maybe I should create a "Workshop" area specifically to post works in progress for critique and help...
Anyway, if you've been lurking for a year you know the drill for my welcome messages, so I won't bore you with the repetition. Enjoy yourself, and I hope to see more of your posts!
-- Bob
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...The President is on the line
As ninety-nine crab rangoons go by...
We'd certainly be happy to help you improve your writing.
Hm. Come to think of it, enough folks do that here that maybe I should create a "Workshop" area specifically to post works in progress for critique and help...
Anyway, if you've been lurking for a year you know the drill for my welcome messages, so I won't bore you with the repetition. Enjoy yourself, and I hope to see more of your posts!
-- Bob
---------
...The President is on the line
As ninety-nine crab rangoons go by...