I just finished reading this and it's GOOD!! I'm impressed! I hope to see you take this further!
Question: I thought Nene was already into her early to mid 20s by the time the story starts. You're mentioning a final growth spurt for her? Isn't that a little late? I'm not much in the know about these things though. It just struck me as a point of curiousity. Is this common in real life? -Logan
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"So there I was, lying flat on my back, with my face pressed into the dirt, thinking, "Wait a minute, something's not rig..."
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Question: I thought Nene was already into her early to mid 20s by the time the story starts. You're mentioning a final growth spurt for her? Isn't that a little late? I'm not much in the know about these things though. It just struck me as a point of curiousity. Is this common in real life? -Logan
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"So there I was, lying flat on my back, with my face pressed into the dirt, thinking, "Wait a minute, something's not rig..."
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