Ha! I was right about Lisa! You did have it planned!
Good job with the story. I loved the way it turned out. I can't wait to see the next one. And the one after that. And the one af... Well, all of them.
You also find some great quotes. Sets off your story quite nicely.
Have a nice day,
faithful DW reader,
Freddy Isnot
-Freddy Isnot
"You are now graduated from newbie and are just clueless. Consider that a compliment."
-Zipcode
Good job with the story. I loved the way it turned out. I can't wait to see the next one. And the one after that. And the one af... Well, all of them.
You also find some great quotes. Sets off your story quite nicely.
Have a nice day,
faithful DW reader,
Freddy Isnot
-Freddy Isnot
"You are now graduated from newbie and are just clueless. Consider that a compliment."
-Zipcode