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Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
Koryimran
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Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website
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11-15-2003, 04:23 AM
Wow.... That was yet another stunning chapter. It was.. creepy for lack of a better word in the Jennifer/Nene scene. Also like all good stories the ending leaves me wanting more. I'm looking forward to the scene where Doug wakes up and tries to puzzel out what "went wrong" with the boomers at the end there. Like some of the others I noticed a few minor typoes and I'll pass them along when I do a reread if they havn't turned up by then.

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Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-14-2003, 06:03 PM
Comments on DWII - Chapter 14 - by Rod.H - 11-14-2003, 06:15 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by the kwp - 11-14-2003, 06:31 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Kokuten - 11-14-2003, 07:45 PM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by cpt kangarooski - 11-15-2003, 01:48 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Koryimran - 11-15-2003, 04:23 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:02 AM
Re: re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-15-2003, 02:57 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 04:49 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Jeanne Hedge - 11-15-2003, 06:38 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-15-2003, 11:41 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-16-2003, 02:07 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Loki Laufeyjarson - 11-16-2003, 04:59 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Ace Dreamer - 11-17-2003, 12:57 AM
Sick, sick, sick - by Bob Schroeck - 11-18-2003, 05:42 PM
Regarding computer bits... - by Logan Darklighter - 11-18-2003, 08:22 PM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-21-2003, 01:08 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Offsides - 11-21-2003, 05:05 AM
Re: Chapter 14 - by Bob Schroeck - 11-21-2003, 05:09 PM
Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Murmur the Fallen - 11-22-2003, 11:08 AM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Ace Dreamer - 11-22-2003, 02:11 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by Elsa Bibat - 11-24-2003, 12:37 PM
Re: Duhh . . . Nope, nope, nope - by Bob Schroeck - 11-26-2003, 08:28 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 07:25 AM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-16-2003, 02:28 PM
Re: Chapter 14 Now Available on My Website - by WengFook - 12-17-2003, 02:44 PM

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