Quote:I just want to state, for the record, that Bob's very first version actually had _more_ impact than the final one IMHO, but it got toned down a hair in the editing process...
It went back and forth between me and the prereaders several times, and how they stood it, I don't know; I only could bear to read it so many times because I was maintaining a purely mechanical point of view on it.
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