> Well, it's not actually her character, it's your character's
> subconscious view of her character...but still.
Let's put it this way. If I don't rewrite, her mild objections won't remain that way. And I'd like to preserve the wa of the household if I can.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
> subconscious view of her character...but still.
Let's put it this way. If I don't rewrite, her mild objections won't remain that way. And I'd like to preserve the wa of the household if I can.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.