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Chapter Five Released
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Re: Chapter Five Released
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08-03-2007, 03:44 PM
Very good chapter, with quite a few interesting revelations on the workings of the Divine.
One minor nitpick during Megumi's mental soliloquy after her talk with Paradox:
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*Argh! Now I'm feeling like I can't be annoyed him because of what he said, and I'm annoyed at him *because* I can't be annoyed at him.*
Think you meant to put another 'at' in the first part of that sentence.
Other than that, a quite nice chapter!
Now where's the next one? WinkWithout a word...
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Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-03-2007, 11:48 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by WengFook - 08-03-2007, 01:19 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Niteflier - 08-03-2007, 03:44 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-03-2007, 06:55 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Ebony - 08-03-2007, 08:34 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Zojojojo - 08-03-2007, 09:03 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-03-2007, 11:33 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-03-2007, 11:35 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-03-2007, 11:36 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by robkelk - 08-04-2007, 12:51 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Kokuten - 08-04-2007, 01:08 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by sweno - 08-04-2007, 01:39 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Balentius - 08-04-2007, 02:30 AM
*ME TOO!* - by Foxboy - 08-04-2007, 05:38 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by jpub - 08-04-2007, 06:34 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by HoagieOfDoom - 08-04-2007, 07:24 AM
That actually makes sense - by ordnance11 - 08-04-2007, 08:42 AM
Re: That actually makes sense - by Kokuten - 08-04-2007, 09:58 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by NomadEngineer - 08-04-2007, 10:09 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by zero sum mgame - 08-04-2007, 11:21 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bluemage - 08-04-2007, 04:54 PM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by robkelk - 08-04-2007, 06:26 PM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by DHBirr - 08-04-2007, 08:02 PM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by jpub - 08-05-2007, 03:43 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by Morganite - 08-05-2007, 07:12 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by Shepherd - 08-05-2007, 08:52 PM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by HoagieOfDoom - 08-06-2007, 12:47 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by Norgarth - 08-06-2007, 04:00 AM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by Logan Darklighter - 08-06-2007, 04:37 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-06-2007, 02:37 PM
Re: *ME TOO!* - by Bob Schroeck - 08-06-2007, 07:29 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by robkelk - 08-06-2007, 08:29 PM
Oops - by Wetter Hexe - 08-06-2007, 09:10 PM
Re: Oops - by Bob Schroeck - 08-07-2007, 01:53 PM
Re: Oops - by WengFook - 08-07-2007, 06:35 PM
Re: Oops - by Bob Schroeck - 08-07-2007, 06:59 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by zero sum mgame - 08-08-2007, 07:30 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-08-2007, 07:00 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by DHBirr - 08-15-2007, 12:59 AM
Re: Re: Chapter Five Released - by robkelk - 08-16-2007, 02:53 AM
Re: Re: Chapter Five Released - by Vulpis - 08-23-2007, 10:58 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Vulpis - 08-23-2007, 01:00 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Bob Schroeck - 08-23-2007, 01:51 PM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by jpub - 08-27-2007, 09:37 AM
Re: Chapter Five Released - by Vulpis - 08-27-2007, 09:13 PM

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