Fabulous.
I'll just note a few high points.
If that's what Symphonic Awareness is like, I -want- it. Not enough to swear service to -Skuld-, though.
Chris and Doug's debate. Well played on both their parts and yours. I assume that you two are happy with it, or we wouldn't have seen it. It looks really good from the outside, too.
The closing battle scene. Another reminder of what I constantly forget. Doug is -terrifying- when angered.
The staff. My first thought was Gungnir, though what that would be doing in Urd's junk drawer, I'm sure I don't want to know. My second thought was "Can't be. He's still alive." -Very- much looking forward to seeing that play out.
One minor kvetch. Every copy I can find of the lyrics to "Closer to Fine" uses 'definitive', not 'divinity'. I'm not sure if this is another case of lyrics being different in the story than they are in real life, if this is an intentional tweak on your part, or if it's a mistake, but I thought I'd point it out.
Thank you both for the effort you've put into this.
-j
I'll just note a few high points.
If that's what Symphonic Awareness is like, I -want- it. Not enough to swear service to -Skuld-, though.
Chris and Doug's debate. Well played on both their parts and yours. I assume that you two are happy with it, or we wouldn't have seen it. It looks really good from the outside, too.
The closing battle scene. Another reminder of what I constantly forget. Doug is -terrifying- when angered.
The staff. My first thought was Gungnir, though what that would be doing in Urd's junk drawer, I'm sure I don't want to know. My second thought was "Can't be. He's still alive." -Very- much looking forward to seeing that play out.
One minor kvetch. Every copy I can find of the lyrics to "Closer to Fine" uses 'definitive', not 'divinity'. I'm not sure if this is another case of lyrics being different in the story than they are in real life, if this is an intentional tweak on your part, or if it's a mistake, but I thought I'd point it out.
Thank you both for the effort you've put into this.
-j