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Chapter Three Now Available
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Excellent chapter as usual. Belldandy's revenge was excellent. And the whole scene with Megumi and the Oath was brilliant. It was so good in fact that I hate to nitpick, but...
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The clean but comfortably-broken-in coverall with her name neatly stitched in kanji on the left breast, not to mention her skill with a wrench, made it clear that she'd worked on engines and vehicles before.
Wouldn't Belldandy's name be written in katakana? (Check under usage.) It's not a stretch of the imagination to say that they might find kanji that could match the sounds of her name and still make sense, but it was something that caught my attention.*********
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Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-27-2007, 06:17 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Feinan - 01-27-2007, 09:28 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by robkelk - 01-27-2007, 09:32 PM
*applauds* - by The Hunterminator - 01-27-2007, 11:48 PM
Re: *applauds* - by sweno - 01-28-2007, 07:14 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by robkelk - 01-29-2007, 01:22 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Kokuten - 01-29-2007, 01:28 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by HoagieOfDoom - 01-29-2007, 02:21 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by WengFook - 01-29-2007, 08:06 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-29-2007, 08:06 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by M Fnord - 01-29-2007, 08:42 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by jpub - 01-29-2007, 08:54 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-29-2007, 09:20 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Star Ranger4 - 01-29-2007, 10:07 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by DHBirr - 01-29-2007, 11:59 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-29-2007, 05:27 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Herr Bad Moon - 01-29-2007, 10:54 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by jpub - 01-30-2007, 01:35 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by robkelk - 01-30-2007, 02:05 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by jpub - 01-30-2007, 02:17 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Honorbridge - 01-30-2007, 02:43 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Valles - 01-30-2007, 03:52 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by jpub - 01-30-2007, 04:00 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Niteflier - 01-30-2007, 04:02 AM
claimed - by itsune9tl - 01-30-2007, 05:41 AM
Re: claimed - by DHBirr - 01-30-2007, 06:29 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-30-2007, 07:44 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Valles - 01-30-2007, 08:13 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by DHBirr - 01-30-2007, 10:53 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by drakensis - 01-30-2007, 12:47 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by WengFook - 01-30-2007, 06:03 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by jpub - 01-30-2007, 07:21 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Ebony - 01-30-2007, 08:32 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 01-30-2007, 10:07 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 02-01-2007, 05:33 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 02-01-2007, 05:37 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 02-01-2007, 05:44 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Bob Schroeck - 02-01-2007, 05:45 PM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by robkelk - 02-02-2007, 04:40 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by Star Ranger4 - 02-02-2007, 08:31 AM
Re: Chapter Three Now Available - by DHBirr - 02-02-2007, 08:36 AM
What's the alloy? - by ordnance11 - 02-02-2007, 09:13 AM
Alloy speculations - by itsune9tl - 02-02-2007, 10:40 PM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Bob Schroeck - 02-03-2007, 08:31 AM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Morganite - 02-03-2007, 10:03 AM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Black Aeronaut - 02-08-2007, 11:06 AM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Bob Schroeck - 02-08-2007, 05:40 PM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Black Aeronaut - 02-08-2007, 08:40 PM
Re: Alloy speculations - by WengFook - 02-09-2007, 10:08 AM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Bob Schroeck - 02-09-2007, 05:03 PM
Re: Alloy speculations - by Black Aeronaut - 02-10-2007, 10:54 AM
Re: Alloy speculations - by jpub - 02-11-2007, 07:47 PM
Re: Alloy speculations - by WengFook - 02-12-2007, 07:32 AM

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