Actually, Nathan's idea comes closest to the kind of feel I want for this point in the story.
Which reminds me that when I have this kind of problem, I really ought to take it to my prereaders' list instead of just angsting about it. Thank you, Nathan!
-- Bob
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It's spelt "Frodo Baggins" but it's pronounced "Throat-wobbler Mangrove."
Which reminds me that when I have this kind of problem, I really ought to take it to my prereaders' list instead of just angsting about it. Thank you, Nathan!
-- Bob
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It's spelt "Frodo Baggins" but it's pronounced "Throat-wobbler Mangrove."