(Aoshima sneaks on to the shrine grounds. He checks left. He checks right. Excellent. His spies were right. She is unguarded.)
(Aoshima allows himself a moment of silent maniacle laughter. His plan is foolproof.)
(Aoshima approaches the door. He rings the doorbell. Bell comes and answers the door, smiling in her "I smile at everybody" way)
(Aoshima opens his mouth, inhaling as if to speak. we zoom in on him from behind as time slows.)
(time snaps back to normal as Chris gives Aoshima a flying both-boots thrust kick to the left side of the chest and Doug gives him a friendly flying tackle to the knees from the right.)
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Perhaps even better as a series of outtakes, each of them having Aoshima blindsided just a little bit earlier in the scene, Aoshima looking shakier and shakier until...
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(Aoshima walking down the street through downtown, whistling, at ease. He turns smartly toward an old but very respectable diner. The door opens with a cheery jingle, and he steps through)
(Shot from the inside: Doug and Chris flanking the door, hidden from the street by decorative pillars, each with an arm cocked back, and a giant grin. Aoshima enters, and notices them just in time.)
(Aoshima drops to the ground visibly cowering, shielding his face with his arms.)
"Aaaugh! Don't hurt me! I'm not doing anything! This isn't even anywhere near her!"
(Doug and Chris look a little embarassed, and let their arms drop a bit.)
"Well, yeah... but it's so much *fun*."
Sirrocco
(Aoshima allows himself a moment of silent maniacle laughter. His plan is foolproof.)
(Aoshima approaches the door. He rings the doorbell. Bell comes and answers the door, smiling in her "I smile at everybody" way)
(Aoshima opens his mouth, inhaling as if to speak. we zoom in on him from behind as time slows.)
(time snaps back to normal as Chris gives Aoshima a flying both-boots thrust kick to the left side of the chest and Doug gives him a friendly flying tackle to the knees from the right.)
*************
Perhaps even better as a series of outtakes, each of them having Aoshima blindsided just a little bit earlier in the scene, Aoshima looking shakier and shakier until...
*************
(Aoshima walking down the street through downtown, whistling, at ease. He turns smartly toward an old but very respectable diner. The door opens with a cheery jingle, and he steps through)
(Shot from the inside: Doug and Chris flanking the door, hidden from the street by decorative pillars, each with an arm cocked back, and a giant grin. Aoshima enters, and notices them just in time.)
(Aoshima drops to the ground visibly cowering, shielding his face with his arms.)
"Aaaugh! Don't hurt me! I'm not doing anything! This isn't even anywhere near her!"
(Doug and Chris look a little embarassed, and let their arms drop a bit.)
"Well, yeah... but it's so much *fun*."
Sirrocco