Quote: Star Ranger4 wrote:
Ok, so he didnt like parts. I dont see where your claiming Vitrol, though. If he'd been taking apart a chapter of TotW, I'd be estatic that someone
looked that hard at it and was giving me feedback about it.
It sounded like he was wanting a *lot* more of Chris thinking, yet far less portrayal of character of Doug.
Although I also get the impression that there's maybe one story in all of Internet Space that might not meet with his approval anyway....
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