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Steel Angel Kurumi and Steel Angel Kurumi S2
Re: DEEP HURTING!!!
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In my case, that refers to having (mostly) the "real" crew, with stories that aren't part of some huge, multi-part story that doesn't make any sense unless you read part 3 and 15...
Then you're in luck, because this is PRECISELY what this is. The only "outside" element is having Mike Nelson accidentally reach the Goddess relief office when trying to find a Chinese food place that delievers to geo-synchronous orbit. You can guess where that goes from there. ^_^
EDIT: In fact, here's the opener, just to tease. ^_^
(Just to be clear, the following was NOT written by me, but by Mark Sachs.)
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In the not-too-distant future...

[We open on the Satellite of Love. Mike is sitting there; before him is a pile of menus from take-out restaurants. He's dialing a phone but having little luck reaching anyone. Propped unobtrusively in one corner of the set is a mirror.]

[Enter Crow.]

CROW: So, Mike, how's the dinner plans?
MIKE: Not so good, Crow. Hardly any of the take-out places will deliver to geosynchronous orbit. And the ones that will are either closed or not taking dinner orders until 6:00 PM. I'm down to this
last one.
CROW: [craning his neck to read it] Hmm? I dunno if I'm up for Japanese. Oh well, I'll be in the load pan bay with Servo if you need me.

[Crow wanders off. Mike dials the number.]

PHONE: Hello, this is the Relief Goddess Office Technical Support Line.
MIKE: Huh? I'm sorry, I wanted Fujishima's Takeout --
PHONE: We will have one of our technical support representatives over to you right away to handle your request. [click]
MIKE: Uh... [stares at phone] Hello? Hello?

[Suddenly there is a whoosh and roar of brilliant special effects, and from the mirror emerges a startlingly beautiful, elaborately dressed brown-haired and big-eyed woman...]

BELLDANDY: Hello?
MIKE: Yaah! Who are you?
BELLDANDY: I am the Goddess Belldandy. You called for the Relief Goddess Office for help. Well, here I am.
MIKE: Goddess?
BELLDANDY: [bowing] At your service. My job is to assist people in dire need, such as yourself. I can grant you one wish.
MIKE: Is this one of those "Twilight Zone" situations where I wish for something and its most awful consequence comes down and destroys me?
BELLDANDY: Of course not! As a Goddess, I cannot lie or trick you.
MIKE: I can wish for anything?
BELLDANDY: Anything your heart desires.
MIKE: All right! Okay, here I go. I wish you would take this satellite back down to Ear --

[Enter Tom and Crow.]

TOM: Hey Mike, we plugged up that leak in the air intake with all of your old socks, but -- Say, who's the new girl?
BELLDANDY: [smiling] Hello!
MIKE: Uh, hi Tom, hi Crow, this is Belldandy. She's... er...
BELLDANDY: [brightly] A goddess.
CROW: You're a goddess?
BELLDANDY: Yes. I work for the Lord, in Technical Support.
TOM: Gee. What's the Lord really like?
BELLDANDY: He's just like Bill Gates.
CROW: Wow.

[Commercial Sign light flashes.]

CROW: Hey, we got commercial sign.
MIKE: Gates willing, we'll be right back.

[**** Commercial Break ****]
-Logan
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"Because Science DEMANDS it!!"
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Steel Angel Kurumi Manga - by ordnance11 - 10-04-2005, 07:12 AM
DEEP HURTING!!! - by Logan Darklighter - 10-04-2005, 11:50 AM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Bob Schroeck - 10-04-2005, 02:15 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Balentius - 10-04-2005, 02:19 PM
RE: El-Hazard 3000 - by Berk - 10-04-2005, 05:25 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Logan Darklighter - 10-04-2005, 07:16 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Logan Darklighter - 10-04-2005, 07:18 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Bob Schroeck - 10-04-2005, 07:22 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Logan Darklighter - 10-04-2005, 07:52 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by mephron - 10-04-2005, 09:52 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Logan Darklighter - 10-04-2005, 10:48 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by ClassicDrogn - 10-05-2005, 06:49 AM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by Bob Schroeck - 10-05-2005, 06:53 PM
Re: DEEP HURTING!!! - by The Wanderer - 10-06-2005, 04:08 PM
A possible insertion point - by ordnance11 - 10-09-2005, 06:42 AM
Re: A possible insertion point - by Bob Schroeck - 10-10-2005, 07:11 PM
Re: A possible insertion point - by ordnance11 - 01-07-2006, 07:12 PM
Re: A possible insertion point - by ClassicDrogn - 01-08-2006, 12:55 AM
Re: A possible insertion point - by Bob Schroeck - 01-09-2006, 05:13 PM

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