Quote:Another possibility: have doug show up _after_ Akio has had his way with her, and she's leaving. He will probably realise what's just happened, and attack then. The whole Doug vs. Akio thing then happens behind the scenes and doesn't affect Utena directly, and could lead to interesting things...
Which is, coincidentally, why I'm having trouble with plotting. Almost anything Doug could do at that point only takes away from her accomplishments later. Which I obviously don't want to do.
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