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The Girls Make A Stop
 
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Mm. Valid points, Jorlem. Maybe it needs a dramatic rewrite.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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The Girls Make A Stop - by Bob Schroeck - 11-19-2012, 06:30 AM
RE: The Girls Make A Stop - by Bob Schroeck - 04-29-2019, 01:43 PM
RE: The Girls Make A Stop - by InsaneTD - 04-30-2019, 02:08 AM
[No subject] - by Norgarth - 11-19-2012, 01:32 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 11-19-2012, 04:50 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 11-20-2012, 12:59 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 11-20-2012, 02:44 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 11-20-2012, 05:22 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 11-20-2012, 09:37 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 11-20-2012, 09:39 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 11-21-2012, 04:24 PM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 11-22-2012, 05:21 AM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 11-22-2012, 06:44 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 11-24-2012, 05:23 PM
[No subject] - by DHBirr - 11-24-2012, 08:45 PM
[No subject] - by Jorlem - 11-25-2012, 12:01 AM
[No subject] - by murmur - 02-03-2013, 01:53 AM

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