Catty, there are hints of the issues here, but the major source for concern is in the ship writeup. The Cadence Lance is a purpose-built weapon, the breaker gate is a solar system-scale teleportation device, and he's got a *bunch* of devices that seem to have magically appeared without being individually constructed. A couple of extra sentences could fix the 'individually constructed' issue pretty quicly, but the others...?
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[STORY] Miracles - by mephron - 01-02-2007, 10:54 PM
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