[STORY] Miracles

[itsune9tl]

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Here are some minor recomended fixses:

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* Your ship is increadebly fast esspecially for it's size.

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Mind you, the ship is essentialy a Giant Carboard tube coated with Handwavium, and no Obvious controls.

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* The weapon is only an illusion.

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For all we know this Cadence Lance forces the Organic components [of thetarget] to march to a set beat.

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* The breaker gate will break things alright. First time it's used the ships vanishes in a flash of light. It reapears one million years later one kilmeter from it's former position.

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In MOS the breaker gate is a satelite that sits out side of the "martian" interpretation of the Limit. He may have one but it has to be deployed. It then just hangs there untill activated. at which point it unfolds. and it apparently consumes itself on use.