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[Story] Raid for Pinky
Writer's notes
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Below are the Character write-ups I put together to help with characterisation.



Utena Ten-Joh

A.K.A.: Yu-Te-Na Ten-Joh ('Real' name, but is hard to pronounce), Pinky (Used by people who want to annoy her.)

Open Character, created by Cobalt Greywalker

Appearance: An 'Adult Entertainment' version of the Utena Tenjou anime character.

Notable Mundane Attributes:

"The clues speak for themselves": A Chief Inspector of the Crystal Tokyo Metropolitan Police.

"Engarde. HA!: Experienced swordswoman.

"Grant me the power...": Extremely well connected.

She's my bride: Married to another woman.

I'm a BISHOUJOU Senshi, but this is a bit much: 107D-53-97cm/42D-21-38", Inside leg 99cm/39 inches. Height is 170cm/5'7".

'Wavium Abilities:

Being a Look-a-like is a pain: Looks like an anime character.

Faster than a snake on a hot tin roof: Enhanced reactions and strength.

Quirks:

Comes up smelling of Roses: Generates a rose scent.

Come up and see me some time: Has the exaggerated figure of an 'Adult Entertainment' professional.

Legs go on for miles: Long legs in proportion to body.

"...To bring the world Revolution!": Will disrupt/destroy any pre-existing order for one that is better.

The Devil's Own Luck: In critical situations, luck favours Utena.

History:

Formerly a Police officer in an American town who found her promotion prospects stifled by her quietly racist colleagues. After running into a
friend from college, she heard about the terraforming projects the Fen were running and thought they might need a police officer or two. Doing some research
led her to the Utena fandom, and sealed her determination.

Her application was rapidly checked and accepted, and she moved to the Castle Magellan construction site near Port Luna to become the ranking Sergeant for
the security force.

Being one of the very few officially trained officers meant she was called on a lot, and quickly started making a name for herself across the Moon. As
such, she started to dye her hair and wear colour-changing contacts to match the pseudonym she'd chosen. After the third crystal city was launched she was
promoted to Detective Sergeant and transferred to Crystal Tokyo. It was here she met Ann Heightmeigher, a botanist working for the Venus Terraforming Project,
and shortly after Kandor-Con they married (becoming one of the few official same-sex marriages in Fenspace).

With her promotion to Detective Inspector in early 2011 came a lot more travel, which is how she met A.C. in person (during one of the latter's quick
trips, which got interrupted by Boskonians) among others.

After successfully closing down a biomass smuggling ring, she was promoted to Chief Inspector. Then the SOS-Con hit, and she was in the thick of
things.

It was June 2013 when she took over the two month secondment to Port Phobos as part of the law enforcement communities' information exchange program.
As this was a reasonably long assignment her wife came with her.

During a trip to Serenity Valley (Yu-Te-Na to question a suspect the Browncoat's were holding, Ann to trade for seeds), they were jumped by a Boskonian
raiding party. Fortunately as a senior police officer Yu-Te-Na had recently received one of the new Patrol Watches, and she triggered the emergency beacon
before hiding it on her person.

The closest facility in range that could detect the beacon was Prometheus Forge, who dispatched the White Stallion on a rescue mission.

En route back to Port Phobos it was discovered she was borderline biomod level contaminated with Handwavium, and it was decided to take care of it there and
then. The Biomod left her looking like an 'Adult Entertainment' version of her chosen hero, which makes getting clothes to fit her a pain. As her
biomod keeps her in a state of homeostasis, she can't change the length of her hair or nails without them growing back very quickly.

Since then she's gone by the easier to pronounce Utena Ten-Joh, and is part of the Senshi's Anti-Dark Kingdom investigations force. She's
started serious sword training for close quarters fighting, given her enhancements from the biomod. She is also part of the group arguing against Haruni being
offered leadership of the Justice sub-faction, and is having some success in increasing the debate as to Haruni's qualifications.

***

Anthy Ten-Joh

A.K.A.: Ann Ten-Joh, nee Heightmeigher

Open Character (to be used in conjunction with Utena Ten-Joh), created by Cobalt Greywalker

Appearance: An 'Adult Entertainment' version of the Anthy Tenjou anime character.

Notable Mundane Attributes:

The Aphids never bother me: Botanist. Skilled at growing flowers, especially Roses.

I am the Rose Bride: Married to another woman.

A bride must be beautiful, but this is overkill: 122E-48-102cm/48E-19-40", inside leg 97cm/38 inches. Height is 165cm/5'5".

'Wavium Abilities:

This makes cosplay easy: Looks like an anime character.

I'm not exactly a ballerina: Enhanced dexterity and flexibility.

Quirks:

"Gee, you smell nice.": Generates a rose scent.

Walking on stilts: Must wear at least 13cm/5" heels to walk without pain, but can wear flats only with some pain. Otherwise suffers crippling agony.

Make a man out of you: Has the exaggerated figure of an 'Adult Entertainment' professional.

"Goes on and on...": Legs too long in proportion for her body.

"You doubt my honour?": WILL keep her promises at all costs.

History:

Ann Ten-Joh (at the time Heightmeigher) joined the Venus Terraforing Project during the outfitting stages of Castle Magellan as a botanist,
helping establish the gardens that contributed to proper atmospheric recycling in the domes. The team she was in helped make a lot of the decisions and did
most of the work of setting up that the other crystal cities used. It was during her work here that she met her future 'husband' Utena.

There was a lot of cross-pollination between the terraforming projects, so when her husband was seconded to Port Phobos she went along to work with her
counterparts there. Because of this, she was with Utena when their ship was attacked and captured.

When it was discovered after their rescue that Utena was nearing biomod level amounts of Handwavium in her system and it would be best to get modded in
controlled conditions, Ann immediately said she was getting one too. This caused an argument with the captain of their rescue vessel A.C. Peters, who was
unwilling to do so at short notice for a non-medical reason. Ann was determined to do it then, and especially to have someone as highly regarded as A.C.
perform it. In the end she had to offer herself as an experimental subject and pay her entire savings.

A.C. managed to successfully give Ann the same style biomod as her husband, leaving her looking like an 'Adult Entertainment' version of Anthy
Himemiya only with a more exaggerated figure. Like her husband, she has since changed to using Anthy Ten-Joh as her name.

Her encounter with A.C. has changed her opinion of 'Mars-sama'. On the one hand, the arguments they had have changed the image she had from the
idealised version most Senshi have to a more realistic version. On the other, Anthy is far more interested in getting her husband and herself closer to
A.C.

Since the biomod she's discovered a talent for growing Roses, and has created several new varieties. None have quite the range of colours as those her
fictional analogue tended, but she's getting close.
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[Story] Raid for Pinky - by Cobalt Greywalker - 01-27-2008, 08:03 PM
Writer's notes - by Cobalt Greywalker - 01-27-2008, 08:07 PM
[No subject] - by Feinan - 01-27-2008, 10:56 PM

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