[Story] Shegomania : Chapter 1 'Goth Expectations' (season 1)
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[Story] Shegomania : Chapter 1 'Goth Expectations' (season 1)
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 Quote:So, is the story okay? (I pre-read what's been posted, and I liked it...) Well, it's not bad. The idea's an interesting kick and the character interaction's snappy. For me the prose feels, ah, precious though, very "look at me, I'm being precocious and WACKY!" which is kind of offputting. But I'm a bitter old cripple, so YMMV. Mr. Fnord interdimensional man of mystery FenWiki - Your One-Stop Shop for Fenspace Information "I. Drink. Your. NERDRAGE!" |
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[Story] Shegomania : Chapter 1 'Goth Expectations' (season 1) - by Ross Van Loan - 08-22-2012, 04:15 PM
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