Not To Be Taken Seriously

[robkelk]

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... followed by Noah herding them into a conference room and giving them Stellvia IDs (thus introducing everyone), ...

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Which isn't working - not enough "show", too much "tell". It's getting changed to "... followed by Noah herding them into a conference room where they have lunch (thus introducing many of the Girls), ..."
This, of course, lets me actually use one of the classic Anime Nightmare Scenarios in a fanfic:
Sana took another gulp from her second can of Jolt cola.

-Rob Kelk
"Read Or Die: not so much a title as a way of life." - Justin Palmer, 6 June 2007
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Rob Kelk
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the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

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