I like the last chapter the best so far what with the impromptu inventing competition, Lisa Vanette's boutique inquiry, and Ryoko's attempt to kill the professor jostled by Miyo.
I agree that Noah is a walking expository device. He explains way too much.
Foreshadowing and referencing back to Crystal Osaka for Crystal Paris is neat.
Yoriko pushing Noah back into Module 2 and then Noah commenting on her basic sense of humanity she possessed is amusing.
Name and taste in humor. Very efficient. Makes sure that it's not a completely different Doug
Warriors? I thought he was from International Strike Teams: Joke
Hermes Universal Deliveries On Stellvia. I'm getting the feeling Noah thought this out a lot more than most of the people in space, except maybe for Grovers Corners.
Stelliva has got to be the only station with copyright permission.
Gateway detector-neat
Fateful Lightning-Semi tractor trailers... IN SPAACE
Three things I know about handwavium. They're locked in time, they're locked from weapons, and they're locked from finding out the creator.
Biomodded (trivial) powers: I would say Uh-oh, except I already revised the origin. Still, Boskonians will experiment with biomods on other people forcibly anyway.
..and that's why Dad gave Doug. Well, The Blue Blazers on World Watch One know what really happened.
Stelliva's a gatepoint. Not only it is Gateway to the Stars, it's Gateway to the Dimensions.
I hope they're only visiting. Hahahaha!
Unless you'e hiding a slaver ring or a drug lab. They probably are, at that.
Drunkard's Walk website. How Bob Schroeck handles the resuls will be interesting.
Camera's boom mike picking up their whispers...Hahahahah!
"Why'd everybody stop talking?"Ah a volunteer!"Amusing.
"Why you're all talking with Osaka accents?"Hahaha!
"Does it explode?" hahahaha!
Mecha-Tama Vacuum. Exploding turtle gives a new meaning to turtle power.
"I'm running over to Venus for a while. " I like this. " I'm just going over the next=door neighbor's to borrow a cup of sugar. "
The Professor beat Skuld who was the one who called his scientific competence into question. I don't think Kaolla has ever done that yet.
I agree that Noah is a walking expository device. He explains way too much.
Foreshadowing and referencing back to Crystal Osaka for Crystal Paris is neat.
Yoriko pushing Noah back into Module 2 and then Noah commenting on her basic sense of humanity she possessed is amusing.
Name and taste in humor. Very efficient. Makes sure that it's not a completely different Doug
Warriors? I thought he was from International Strike Teams: Joke
Hermes Universal Deliveries On Stellvia. I'm getting the feeling Noah thought this out a lot more than most of the people in space, except maybe for Grovers Corners.
Stelliva has got to be the only station with copyright permission.
Gateway detector-neat
Fateful Lightning-Semi tractor trailers... IN SPAACE
Three things I know about handwavium. They're locked in time, they're locked from weapons, and they're locked from finding out the creator.
Biomodded (trivial) powers: I would say Uh-oh, except I already revised the origin. Still, Boskonians will experiment with biomods on other people forcibly anyway.
..and that's why Dad gave Doug. Well, The Blue Blazers on World Watch One know what really happened.
Stelliva's a gatepoint. Not only it is Gateway to the Stars, it's Gateway to the Dimensions.
I hope they're only visiting. Hahahaha!
Unless you'e hiding a slaver ring or a drug lab. They probably are, at that.
Drunkard's Walk website. How Bob Schroeck handles the resuls will be interesting.
Camera's boom mike picking up their whispers...Hahahahah!
"Why'd everybody stop talking?"Ah a volunteer!"Amusing.
"Why you're all talking with Osaka accents?"Hahaha!
"Does it explode?" hahahaha!
Mecha-Tama Vacuum. Exploding turtle gives a new meaning to turtle power.
"I'm running over to Venus for a while. " I like this. " I'm just going over the next=door neighbor's to borrow a cup of sugar. "
The Professor beat Skuld who was the one who called his scientific competence into question. I don't think Kaolla has ever done that yet.