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[discussion] Surfing with the Alien - comments here
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien (revised)
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Dammit, I can't post the finished revision of 1a/1b/1c, because I don't have my card reader along... so you get a teaser instead. Much less of a teaser since I've posted later parts than this, but a teaser nonetheless.

Please tell me if this is plausibly Faithlike, I'm not that knowledgeable about BTVS/Angel this far in, most fanficcers have thrown things totally in another direction by then.

- CD
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Faith came to in the dark. The space was small, barely big enough for her legs to be straight where she sat against a wall, but the air wasn't sour from being closed in, or musty with age. Her slayer sense was silent, and so was the box, room, whatever. "Where the fuck am I?" she wondered, feeling along the walls, and the low ceiling overhead. There was just barely room to stand.
Then, she remembered. The fight with B, the jump, the shit she pulled on Wesley, the fight with Angel where he wouldn't kill her. The trial.
"S'right, I'm in jail. Stupid bitch tried to start sometin' with the new girl and I busted her up, then the guards came... Prob'ly threw me in solitary. Fuck."
There was no way to know what time it was, and of course no light switch. She sat down again in the still, silent darkness, closed her eyes, and tried to think about being a better person. She wasn't brimming over with ideas, beyond "Try not to kill anyone else" and "Don't go stabbing people in the back," but she figured she'd have a while to think about the problem.
That's what she was here for, after all.

Surfing With the Alien 4
Mist Steaks With Kitten Sauce
SERVO: Loook *deeeeply* into my eyes... Tell me, what do you see?
CROW: (hypnotized) A twisted man who wants to inflict his pain upon others.
For the next 72 hours, Itachi intoned, I will slap you with this trout. - Spying no Jutsu, chapter 3
"In the futuristic taco bell of the year 20XX, justice wears an aluminum sombrero!"hemlock-martini
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
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surf's up, dude - by Rieverre - 12-24-2006, 03:48 AM
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien - by Sirrocco - 12-24-2006, 04:24 AM
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien - by Rieverre - 12-24-2006, 03:35 PM
Re: Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien - by Sirrocco - 12-24-2006, 09:59 PM
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien (revised) - by Sirrocco - 01-05-2007, 04:59 AM
ehehe - by Foxboy - 01-05-2007, 06:12 AM
Re Faith... - by Foxboy - 01-05-2007, 09:04 AM
Re: Re Faith... - by ClassicDrogn - 01-05-2007, 09:09 AM
Re: Re Faith... - by Valles - 01-05-2007, 09:13 AM
Re: Re Faith... - by Sirrocco - 01-06-2007, 06:37 AM
Re: Re Faith... - by ClassicDrogn - 01-06-2007, 08:25 AM
story - by CattyNebulart - 01-07-2007, 01:41 PM
noteski - by ClassicDrogn - 07-06-2007, 04:11 AM
Re: noteski - by M Fnord - 07-06-2007, 05:22 AM
Re: noteski - by Bob Schroeck - 07-06-2007, 01:46 PM
Well, that took a while - by ClassicDrogn - 07-18-2007, 02:47 AM
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien (revised) - by Kokuten - 07-21-2007, 02:49 AM
Re: [STORY] Surfing with the Alien (revised) - by ClassicDrogn - 08-03-2007, 09:49 PM
AI Reservations? - by Foxboy - 08-08-2007, 07:50 AM

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