No worries, Fnord, that came out very well. A few typos here and there, but that's incredibly minor. Nicely crafted, with great characterization -- I got a
very solid sense of everyone. Kudos.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
very solid sense of everyone. Kudos.
-- Bob
---------
Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.