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TYPOS!!!! *shakefist*
Ah well, those're the breaks, I guess. I'm glad you thought the characterization was good, 'cause I am totally fucking blind to that sort of thing. I can't tell if my characters are different or if they all sound exactly the same. So it's good to have to some outside feedback.
Ah, wait until you see what else the VVS has hiding under the bed, or is planning on doing.
Here's a hint, and no spoiling in the forum: Dee is Aineko. Moo hoo ha ha ha.
And here I was worried that I'd get an irate email about how I'd ruined the character with my hackish portrayal.
As a bonus, if you've never heard of Explosions in the Sky, the closing music is available http://www.explosionsinthesky.com/mp3s/ ... InMine.mp3]right here. Totally worth your time to listen to.
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Bob Schroeck Wrote:No worries, Fnord, that came out very well. A few typos here and there, but that's incredibly minor. Nicely crafted, with great characterization -- I got a very solid sense of everyone. Kudos
TYPOS!!!! *shakefist*
Ah well, those're the breaks, I guess. I'm glad you thought the characterization was good, 'cause I am totally fucking blind to that sort of thing. I can't tell if my characters are different or if they all sound exactly the same. So it's good to have to some outside feedback.
Cobalt Greywalker Wrote:Definite giggles out of this Fnord, but damnit now I have to fight off all the ideas from Eddie and Leonard about upgrading the Forge. ARGH.
Ah, wait until you see what else the VVS has hiding under the bed, or is planning on doing.
Here's a hint, and no spoiling in the forum: Dee is Aineko. Moo hoo ha ha ha.
robkelk Wrote:My little girl's all grown up...
And here I was worried that I'd get an irate email about how I'd ruined the character with my hackish portrayal.
As a bonus, if you've never heard of Explosions in the Sky, the closing music is available http://www.explosionsinthesky.com/mp3s/ ... InMine.mp3]right here. Totally worth your time to listen to.
Mr. Fnord interdimensional man of mystery
FenWiki - Your One-Stop Shop for Fenspace Information
"I. Drink. Your. NERDRAGE!"