It looks like you've got a good crew here, both for the ship and for storytelling. They're a bit nebulous, but that's easily enough fixed by telling a story about them.
Erik's obviously a Gearhead, possibly part of the "Church of Mecha" (a real-world informal mostly-British online group of mecha anime fen). I'm getting the vibe that he's the Mal of this ship's crew...
Christopher's "must have meat" quirk combined with his obvious biomod is going to cause him a few problems - meat is expensive in most of Fenspace, and most of the 'Danelaw doesn't like biomods. Not that you can't work around it (NinjaBurger's offerings, the steak sandwiches at Manny O'Kelly's in Moonbase Alpha, and half the menu at Meg's on Stellvia can fill his needs), but there's always the chance that he'll be stuck a day or two away from the closest non-vegan restaurant. You intended this as a plot point, right? (I don't believe anyone else has a Kilrathi on board yet - bonus points for grabbing this overlooked bit of Cool.)
What's Susan's niche in the group? Is she the quartermaster / freight boss, or does she stay at home base and run the office? Answering this will help define her personality... (Oh, and if Susan's willing to cosplay as Nenene from R.O.D the TV, Yayoi will cosplay as Yomiko with her. )
Roll is a bit underdeveloped. I'm not even sure what (if any) his/her/its apparent gender or base model is supposed to be... You might want to flesh out Roll's personality a bit.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
Erik's obviously a Gearhead, possibly part of the "Church of Mecha" (a real-world informal mostly-British online group of mecha anime fen). I'm getting the vibe that he's the Mal of this ship's crew...
Christopher's "must have meat" quirk combined with his obvious biomod is going to cause him a few problems - meat is expensive in most of Fenspace, and most of the 'Danelaw doesn't like biomods. Not that you can't work around it (NinjaBurger's offerings, the steak sandwiches at Manny O'Kelly's in Moonbase Alpha, and half the menu at Meg's on Stellvia can fill his needs), but there's always the chance that he'll be stuck a day or two away from the closest non-vegan restaurant. You intended this as a plot point, right? (I don't believe anyone else has a Kilrathi on board yet - bonus points for grabbing this overlooked bit of Cool.)
What's Susan's niche in the group? Is she the quartermaster / freight boss, or does she stay at home base and run the office? Answering this will help define her personality... (Oh, and if Susan's willing to cosplay as Nenene from R.O.D the TV, Yayoi will cosplay as Yomiko with her. )
Roll is a bit underdeveloped. I'm not even sure what (if any) his/her/its apparent gender or base model is supposed to be... You might want to flesh out Roll's personality a bit.
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012