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10-08-2010, 09:58 AM

Hrm... I dunno, Mal. Maybe more like an inspired re-write including elements and inspiration from the first two. For one I like how Dartz's version has the brief 'echoes' we see, as well as what happens on the military and infrastucture side of things (any water and sewage connections are going to be a MESS). And from yours I like the multiple view points from within, without, and off to the side.

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