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10-08-2010, 03:38 PM

Quote:Maybe more like an inspired re-write including elements and inspiration from the first two.

Well, if you've got an idea go for it and we'll put it up along with the others. To be honest, I'm not happy with either of them; mine feels too brief and scattershot, while Dartz's feels too overblown to me. So if you've got a third option, or a fourth or fifth, show me.
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[story][Fenspace Alternates] The South Is Rising, Someone Get A Hammer - by M Fnord - 05-25-2010, 09:56 PM

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