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12-20-2010, 12:06 AM

Okay, I've re-edited the sequence and gotten it to a point where I think it's reasonable. I've also cropped a few hundred words out of the Ciara parts (D, I hope you've got the whole thing saved somewhere else.) to help make that flow better. And finally, I've broken up and resequenced the beginning a little, hopefully make that flow a little better. So go check out the doc.
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[story][Fenspace Alternates] The South Is Rising, Someone Get A Hammer - by M Fnord - 05-25-2010, 09:56 PM

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