Okay, one thing I think you need to do is double space your line breaks. It greatly increases readability.
Let me see if I have this straight.
First you're avatar flies the Hacker's Haven into space. Once he has that as a habitat, he begins work on the Wings.
The Wings of Steel either a Space Craft or Powered Armor of some sort, I'm not sure of which. Either way, they bond to you avatar as part of his biomod. This bond prevents him from moving a certain distance from the Wings. This distance is determined by how secure he feels at the time.
Am I on track so far?
I like it, you just need to improve your formatting. But what do I know. I just jumped on this bandwagon yesterday, myself.
Let me see if I have this straight.
First you're avatar flies the Hacker's Haven into space. Once he has that as a habitat, he begins work on the Wings.
The Wings of Steel either a Space Craft or Powered Armor of some sort, I'm not sure of which. Either way, they bond to you avatar as part of his biomod. This bond prevents him from moving a certain distance from the Wings. This distance is determined by how secure he feels at the time.
Am I on track so far?
I like it, you just need to improve your formatting. But what do I know. I just jumped on this bandwagon yesterday, myself.