Well, that's pretty much why I slapped an RFC tag on it. Besides, I pretty much pulled all this out in a matter of a couple hours. Good characters don't always develop overnight.
I'll see what I can do to tone it down, but just saying it needs serious rework, possibly scrapping, doesn't help me much.
I'll see what I can do to tone it down, but just saying it needs serious rework, possibly scrapping, doesn't help me much.