M Fnord Wrote:You're trying to sell me on the idea that this dude is the slickest thing since the Old Spice Guy, and I'm not buying it.
The vibe I'm getting is that he doesn't always drink beer, but when he does, he prefers Dos Equis. And that ad campaign was over-the-top on purpose.
Something to consider for the re-write: Everybody has quirks and flaws; that's what makes people interesting. What are this guy's quirks and flaws?
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012