Well, do keep in mind that the render was done using Poser's default lighting setup. I had a similar issue with a local friend seeing it, he was thinking the body freckles were too strong, and the face freckles not nearly strong enough. As for her grin, this is just the test, I can slap the grin on later when it's time to pose and render.
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"You know how parents tell you everything's going to fine, but you know they're lying to make you feel better? Everything's going to be fine." - The Doctor
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"You know how parents tell you everything's going to fine, but you know they're lying to make you feel better? Everything's going to be fine." - The Doctor