Yeah. Caught a few of them. Went back over it and made some pretty significant changes. It's better than it was, but I'm still not certain about the order of things, expanding a lot of things. I'm forging into uncharted territory, and I'm still figuring out how to do things like this. Like I said, I normally don't write this style of story, and bringing all the threads together in Quattro's lab without tangling them up is harder than I thought it'd be.
Surprised at how close Quattro came to winning outright, actually. Now that I think about it, if she hadn't bothered to actively erase Copy-Cathy, and just shot her, Quattro would've gotten out in time.
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Surprised at how close Quattro came to winning outright, actually. Now that I think about it, if she hadn't bothered to actively erase Copy-Cathy, and just shot her, Quattro would've gotten out in time.
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