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[Finished shortstory]Fenspace, the prequel
 
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You seem to have lost the Slapstick Effect (and indeed the entire Genre Directive) somewhere, though. Although presented in a highly humourous fashion, this would be a deeply dystopian outcome for the people involved.

Never mind, this is obviously alpha Handwavium. Humans got the production stuff, or at least the beta version.
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[Finished shortstory]Fenspace, the prequel - by HRogge - 07-18-2011, 07:41 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-19-2011, 03:32 AM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 07-19-2011, 07:05 AM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 07-20-2011, 04:00 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 07-20-2011, 06:02 AM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 07-20-2011, 05:14 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 07-22-2011, 08:40 AM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 07-22-2011, 03:10 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-22-2011, 03:31 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 07-22-2011, 04:03 PM

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