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A reluctant Fen, or how I came to Fenspace (Fiction test)
 
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I'm interested in seeing more before passing judgement. So far it seems okay to me. Don't worry too much about Mary-Sueism... you're writing the main character in your own story, they're entitled to be a bit special. Everyone has to get that one thing they're the best at, after all... otherwise why would anyone tell a story about them?

Also, 17 wouldn't be an unusual age at all to enter college... it'd be considered about normal here in fact. (Was the age I went in, as a matter of fact).
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A reluctant Fen, or how I came to Fenspace (Fiction test) - by New Hampshire Battleship Lover - 07-18-2011, 11:50 PM
[No subject] - by M Fnord - 07-19-2011, 03:20 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-19-2011, 03:45 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 07-19-2011, 04:35 AM
Changes are definately possible - by New Hampshire Battleship Lover - 07-19-2011, 05:29 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 07-19-2011, 03:19 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 07-19-2011, 04:52 PM
Saoirse's opinion--and thaks for the feedback - by New Hampshire Battleship Lover - 07-19-2011, 07:37 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 07-19-2011, 09:22 PM
Spyware - by New Hampshire Battleship Lover - 07-19-2011, 09:57 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-19-2011, 10:27 PM
[No subject] - by Mark Skarr - 07-19-2011, 11:31 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-20-2011, 12:02 AM
[No subject] - by Mark Skarr - 07-20-2011, 12:07 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 07-20-2011, 02:32 PM
[No subject] - by M Fnord - 07-20-2011, 03:31 PM

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