Welcome, Warringer! When you said in your request for membership that you wanted in on Fenspace, I didn't realize you had something already written and ready to go. Which is pretty cool, actually. I like what you've done, both with inspiration and execution. But correct me if I'm wrong -- English isn't your first language, is it? You've got a few errors that seem to point that way. No big deal, that -- we'll be happy to help you first fix anything that needs it, and second gain a better fluency for future work. (And speaking of which, I'm sure the Grover's Corners brought up a few hundred kilos of loose topsoil on its outer hull, which is probably leaving behind a very faint "comet's tail" of dirt everywhere it goes, like a guest who won't wipe off their shoes...
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.