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[Story][RFC --PLEASE!!!]The Gauntlet
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#5
09-04-2011, 12:24 AM
Dartz Wrote:I like the writing... it has a clipping, high-speed energy to it that really brings it along nicely.

I'm not sure what I can add to it, mind. Sort of drawing a mental blank.
The idea I sort of had was a little scene setting (how the vid was obtained, who's watching, etc... It doesn't need to be too detailed.), then some character reactions to what was seen (include speculation as to what's going on, rumours as to the people taking part, general chatter, things like that).
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[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-03-2011, 10:27 PM
[No subject] - by Warringer - 09-03-2011, 10:41 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-03-2011, 11:20 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-04-2011, 12:24 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-04-2011, 05:20 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-04-2011, 04:26 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-05-2011, 06:22 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-05-2011, 07:52 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-07-2011, 09:21 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-07-2011, 11:45 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-08-2011, 03:01 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-08-2011, 03:23 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-11-2011, 12:21 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-11-2011, 11:40 PM
[No subject] - by Warringer - 09-13-2011, 12:22 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-13-2011, 05:54 PM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 09-13-2011, 06:22 PM
[No subject] - by Ebony - 09-13-2011, 06:27 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-13-2011, 11:10 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-14-2011, 12:47 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-14-2011, 09:20 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-15-2011, 01:26 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-19-2011, 11:12 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-20-2011, 12:33 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-20-2011, 12:53 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 09-20-2011, 04:14 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-28-2011, 09:11 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-29-2011, 04:54 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-29-2011, 11:27 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-30-2011, 01:20 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 10-02-2011, 12:19 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 10-04-2011, 11:39 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-05-2011, 12:49 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 10-05-2011, 02:04 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-05-2011, 03:02 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-18-2011, 03:07 AM
[No subject] - by Foxboy - 10-18-2011, 04:14 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-18-2011, 03:31 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 10-18-2011, 11:23 PM
[No subject] - by Proginoskes - 10-28-2011, 05:09 AM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 10-29-2011, 06:37 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-29-2011, 08:54 PM
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[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-30-2011, 04:17 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 10-30-2011, 04:34 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-30-2011, 05:05 PM
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