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[Story][RFC] The Spices of Life
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09-21-2011, 04:39 PM
“It think she’s just making a run to pick up a fridge full of Bountys.”

would be better as I instead of It or even *I* (as in marks to denote she's emphasizing it)
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-
NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
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[Story][RFC] The Spices of Life - by Dartz - 09-21-2011, 04:33 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 09-21-2011, 06:47 AM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-21-2011, 04:39 PM
[No subject] - by HRogge - 09-21-2011, 05:26 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-21-2011, 10:47 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-21-2011, 11:22 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 09-22-2011, 12:16 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-25-2011, 04:19 AM
[No subject] - by Warringer - 09-25-2011, 02:03 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-25-2011, 04:22 PM
[No subject] - by Star Ranger4 - 09-25-2011, 08:19 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 09-27-2011, 03:50 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-27-2011, 04:10 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-30-2011, 05:02 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 09-30-2011, 04:27 PM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 09-30-2011, 08:27 PM
[No subject] - by Cobalt Greywalker - 09-30-2011, 11:01 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-01-2011, 03:36 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-01-2011, 03:38 AM
[No subject] - by M Fnord - 10-01-2011, 04:22 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 10-01-2011, 04:58 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 10-02-2011, 12:11 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 10-02-2011, 12:50 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 10-03-2011, 12:20 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 10-03-2011, 01:56 AM
[No subject] - by Dartz - 10-03-2011, 02:48 AM

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